Just Dessert
Please don't tell me you told me so,understand now I know you did;maybe I just don't wanna put any thought in that direction.Kindly step back, and watch the moon, I'm about to loose nearly everything...
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I see the idea behind this one RG, but the first stanza readsvery disjointed to me, making the dessert a bit of a heavy one MattAIAP
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Thanks for reading and commenting, Matt.I may have forced the acrostic too much in this one.RGFellowshipNeedsomeexercise?..The Challenge Centre
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yes i would agree with Sabresun on this.But it is always something you can reuse dwon the road.
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Wote, thanks for reading and commenting.RGFellowshipNeedsomeexercise?..The Challenge Centre
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Nice one RG. As it's a fun poem - oowww perhaps it's not with all that pumpkin making its re-entry into the world- I'd subtitute a couple of lines Please don't tell me you told me so,understand now I...
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Jean, thanks for the thoughs and the line suggestions. I have been meaning to get back to this one and tweak it a bit.RGFellowshipNeedsomeexercise?..The Challenge Centre
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Yeah, goes to mine too........There is no cure for birth and death save to enjoy the interval. - Santayana
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I see you are catching up, Nag~ thanks for reading and commentingRGFellowshipNeedsomeexercise?..The Challenge Centre
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